It is so hard to diagnose your own illness and your own book's problems. We live the stories we write. First, they are formed in our brains and we try to get the words on paper or a computer screen but they don't always match with our mind's eye. I find it valuable to get other's to read my work. I find it challenging to get those real honest opinions. I want someone to discect it and tell me what is not working and what is and where I need to add more and where I need to delete. I think so many of us struggle with this aspect. Keep writing and thinking!
It is so hard to diagnose your own illness and your own book's problems. We live the stories we write. First, they are formed in our brains and we try to get the words on paper or a computer screen but they don't always match with our mind's eye. I find it valuable to get other's to read my work. I find it challenging to get those real honest opinions. I want someone to discect it and tell me what is not working and what is and where I need to add more and where I need to delete. I think so many of us struggle with this aspect. Keep writing and thinking!